Line 9—Collingwoodʼs
decision to isolate the word
so on its own line here does not appear in keeping with
Ruskinʼs lineation of the original witness of the poem
fair‐copied in
MS I, in which
so appears to have been indented as runover
belonging to the line “was better than our mouses so” (“his sight” in the line “of her
good wall for then his sight” and “dog just then” in the line “when frightened was the dog
just then” are similarly indented in the
MS I witness and, interestingly,
were apparently
interpreted by
Collingwood as runover in this printed edition of the poem). Further
evidence that the
author intended
so to belong to the line
“was better than our mouses so” may be found in the fact that
Collingwoodʼs
decision to isolate the word disrupts the original aabbccddeeffgg coupleted rhyme scheme of the
MS I witness—imposing
a less elegant aabbccdd
effgg
hh rhyme scheme instead.