Previously unpublished.
Two strophes on the subject of a storm appear in succession, separated by a
horizontal line. Such lines separate the stanzas also in
“Glen of Glenfarg” (“Glen of Glenfarg thy beauteous rill”),
another poem in
“Poetry Discriptive”,
but in that case the stanzas clearly flow continuously from one to the next. In
“The storm”,
strophe (
b) appears to start the poem anew and revise (
a); and as an indication that
Ruskin
meant strophe (
b) to replace (
a), he wrote the word
“bad” on the same line as the runover of the final line of (
a), as if declaring that strophe rejected. Little
time appears to have elapsed between this decision and the composition of (
b), the
hand remaining consistent; and the immediacy of this revision perhaps explains why
Ruskin did not repeat the title,
as if considering the original title to remain in play.